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Short Poems

Postby Josiah » Thu Aug 23, 2012 8:07 pm

Post short poems that you wrote in here.

This is called "Brand New Start"

And if I could, I'd take it back
The midnight slips have now turned black
All the joy had turned to hope
And what I hoped into regret
And as I look into your eyes
One of love and one despise
Unstick the pages in my heart
Time to make a brand new start

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Re: Short Poems

Postby Crumbso » Thu Aug 23, 2012 9:33 pm

Nice poem... but really?? You're gonna call it that?

Still there's some nice imagery.
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Re: Not So Short Poems

Postby zazthespaz » Sun Aug 26, 2012 10:17 pm

Just another night on the boards
Looking over old awards
Trophies that I never won
Despite the hardest race I've run.
Competing for glory and fame
From people who don't know my name.
Kind of embarassing to say the least
But I've come to terms with it, found my peace.
Right now I am the only one on,
Except for one other, Google[Bot]
He doesn't respond when I have spoke,
Post in the forums nor laugh at my jokes,
Kind of a metaphor of my life,
Speechless and quiet, no one in sight.
I then realize it's after 10 pm,
And here I am typing pointlessly again,
So I hit "submit" and send my post on it's way,
Only to turn into another thread in the fray.
In the grand scheme of things this is pointless and dumb
Like watching paint dry or sucking your thumb,
Kind of like this poem, we just keep going on,
Wondering if these boards will not see a new dawn.
I'm not sure where I'm going,
So I'm just going to stop and not rhyme.
:facepalm

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Re: Not So Short Poems

Postby Andy92 » Sun Aug 26, 2012 10:41 pm

zazthespaz wrote:Just another night on the boards
Looking over old awards
Trophies that I never won
Despite the hardest race I've run.
Competing for glory and fame
From people who don't know my name.
Kind of embarassing to say the least
But I've come to terms with it, found my peace.
Right now I am the only one on,
Except for one other, Google[Bot]
He doesn't respond when I have spoke,
Post in the forums nor laugh at my jokes,
Kind of a metaphor of my life,
Speechless and quiet, no one in sight.
I then realize it's after 10 pm,
And here I am typing pointlessly again,
So I hit "submit" and send my post on it's way,
Only to turn into another thread in the fray.
In the grand scheme of things this is pointless and dumb
Like watching paint dry or sucking your thumb,
Kind of like this poem, we just keep going on,
Wondering if these boards will not see a new dawn.
I'm not sure where I'm going,
So I'm just going to stop and not rhyme.

*its
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Re: thats all a lie. I hate you. Jerk.

Postby zazthespaz » Mon Aug 27, 2012 12:26 am

Andy you just don't understand my art. I specifically avoided the apostrophe for a reason. You're so mainstream.
:facepalm

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Re: Short Poems

Postby Andy92 » Mon Aug 27, 2012 11:37 pm

:lol I thought it was a really funny read, but I couldn't resist. Especially since you started the Grammar Thread. ;)
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Re: But I do

Postby zazthespaz » Tue Aug 28, 2012 12:04 am

Haha guess I can't blame you...
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Re: BAM 2 minutes bored at work.

Postby zazthespaz » Fri Dec 07, 2012 11:31 pm

Don't leave me alone,
Show me I'm not far from home.
The path is steep but I'm up for the fight.
Leave open the door,
For the end of the war,
It's my map, my guide, the tiny beam of light.
Don't leave me alone.
:facepalm

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Re: BAM 2 minutes bored at work.

Postby Josiah » Sat Dec 08, 2012 11:07 pm

zazthespaz wrote:Don't leave me alone,
Show me I'm not far from home.
The path is steep but I'm up for the fight.
Leave open the door,
For the end of the war,
It's my map, my guide, the tiny beam of light.
Don't leave me alone.

Fucking terrible.

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Re: like most everything...

Postby zazthespaz » Sat Dec 08, 2012 11:33 pm

Josiah wrote:
zazthespaz wrote:Don't leave me alone,
Show me I'm not far from home.
The path is steep but I'm up for the fight.
Leave open the door,
For the end of the war,
It's my map, my guide, the tiny beam of light.
Don't leave me alone.

Fucking terrible.

:lol you wish. it sounds fantastic in my head!
:facepalm

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Re: Short Poems

Postby Jim » Wed Dec 12, 2012 9:05 am

Both of you, give up.
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Re: Booo. Go home

Postby zazthespaz » Wed Dec 12, 2012 11:18 am

That doesn't rhyme at all!
:facepalm

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Re: Short Poems

Postby Josiah » Wed Dec 12, 2012 10:40 pm

Hahahaha just messing with you zaz, it was really good.

Aye jim fuck off, I can't do much in life but I can write.

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Re: Short Poems

Postby Jim » Thu Dec 13, 2012 4:30 pm

I prefer your photography..
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Re: Short Poems

Postby Josiah » Thu Dec 13, 2012 5:01 pm

What's wrong with my writing?

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Re: Short Poems

Postby Jim » Thu Dec 13, 2012 7:01 pm

I just prefer your photography, Josiah.
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Re: Short Poems

Postby Josiah » Thu Dec 13, 2012 7:05 pm

Is there an actual reason why you don't like my writing, or are you just saying that because you don't like me?

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Re: Short Poems

Postby Timotheus » Fri Dec 14, 2012 9:09 am

Josiah wrote:Post short poems that you wrote in here.

This is called "Brand New Start"

And if I could, I'd take it back
The midnight slips have now turned black
All the joy had turned to hope
And what I hoped into regret
And as I look into your eyes
One of love and one despise
Unstick the pages in my heart
Time to make a brand new start


This is so much more emotional now that he's gone :lol
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Re: Short Poems

Postby Jim » Fri Dec 14, 2012 7:02 pm

Ironic, eh?
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Re: except he's alive!

Postby zazthespaz » Fri Dec 14, 2012 9:16 pm

haha, the whole, "once the artist dies, their pieces increase in value" thing
:facepalm


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