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Post by Josiah »

Post short poems that you wrote in here.

This is called "Brand New Start"

And if I could, I'd take it back
The midnight slips have now turned black
All the joy had turned to hope
And what I hoped into regret
And as I look into your eyes
One of love and one despise
Unstick the pages in my heart
Time to make a brand new start

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Re: Short Poems

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Nice poem... but really?? You're gonna call it that?

Still there's some nice imagery.
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Re: Not So Short Poems

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Just another night on the boards
Looking over old awards
Trophies that I never won
Despite the hardest race I've run.
Competing for glory and fame
From people who don't know my name.
Kind of embarassing to say the least
But I've come to terms with it, found my peace.
Right now I am the only one on,
Except for one other, Google[Bot]
He doesn't respond when I have spoke,
Post in the forums nor laugh at my jokes,
Kind of a metaphor of my life,
Speechless and quiet, no one in sight.
I then realize it's after 10 pm,
And here I am typing pointlessly again,
So I hit "submit" and send my post on it's way,
Only to turn into another thread in the fray.
In the grand scheme of things this is pointless and dumb
Like watching paint dry or sucking your thumb,
Kind of like this poem, we just keep going on,
Wondering if these boards will not see a new dawn.
I'm not sure where I'm going,
So I'm just going to stop and not rhyme.
anguyen92 wrote:
Oh well. Deal with it.
gbruin wrote:
Go reread what zaz says

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Re: Not So Short Poems

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zazthespaz wrote:Just another night on the boards
Looking over old awards
Trophies that I never won
Despite the hardest race I've run.
Competing for glory and fame
From people who don't know my name.
Kind of embarassing to say the least
But I've come to terms with it, found my peace.
Right now I am the only one on,
Except for one other, Google[Bot]
He doesn't respond when I have spoke,
Post in the forums nor laugh at my jokes,
Kind of a metaphor of my life,
Speechless and quiet, no one in sight.
I then realize it's after 10 pm,
And here I am typing pointlessly again,
So I hit "submit" and send my post on it's way,
Only to turn into another thread in the fray.
In the grand scheme of things this is pointless and dumb
Like watching paint dry or sucking your thumb,
Kind of like this poem, we just keep going on,
Wondering if these boards will not see a new dawn.
I'm not sure where I'm going,
So I'm just going to stop and not rhyme.
*its
anguyen92 wrote:Oh well. Deal with it.

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Re: thats all a lie. I hate you. Jerk.

Post by zazthespaz »

Andy you just don't understand my art. I specifically avoided the apostrophe for a reason. You're so mainstream.
anguyen92 wrote:
Oh well. Deal with it.
gbruin wrote:
Go reread what zaz says

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:lol I thought it was a really funny read, but I couldn't resist. Especially since you started the Grammar Thread. ;)
anguyen92 wrote:Oh well. Deal with it.

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Re: But I do

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Haha guess I can't blame you...
anguyen92 wrote:
Oh well. Deal with it.
gbruin wrote:
Go reread what zaz says

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Re: BAM 2 minutes bored at work.

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Don't leave me alone,
Show me I'm not far from home.
The path is steep but I'm up for the fight.
Leave open the door,
For the end of the war,
It's my map, my guide, the tiny beam of light.
Don't leave me alone.
anguyen92 wrote:
Oh well. Deal with it.
gbruin wrote:
Go reread what zaz says

Josiah

Re: BAM 2 minutes bored at work.

Post by Josiah »

zazthespaz wrote:Don't leave me alone,
Show me I'm not far from home.
The path is steep but I'm up for the fight.
Leave open the door,
For the end of the war,
It's my map, my guide, the tiny beam of light.
Don't leave me alone.
Fucking terrible.

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Re: like most everything...

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Josiah wrote:
zazthespaz wrote:Don't leave me alone,
Show me I'm not far from home.
The path is steep but I'm up for the fight.
Leave open the door,
For the end of the war,
It's my map, my guide, the tiny beam of light.
Don't leave me alone.
Fucking terrible.
:lol you wish. it sounds fantastic in my head!
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Oh well. Deal with it.
gbruin wrote:
Go reread what zaz says

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Re: Short Poems

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Both of you, give up.
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Re: Booo. Go home

Post by zazthespaz »

That doesn't rhyme at all!
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Oh well. Deal with it.
gbruin wrote:
Go reread what zaz says

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Hahahaha just messing with you zaz, it was really good.

Aye jim fuck off, I can't do much in life but I can write.

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I prefer your photography..
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What's wrong with my writing?

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I just prefer your photography, Josiah.
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Is there an actual reason why you don't like my writing, or are you just saying that because you don't like me?

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Re: Short Poems

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Josiah wrote:Post short poems that you wrote in here.

This is called "Brand New Start"

And if I could, I'd take it back
The midnight slips have now turned black
All the joy had turned to hope
And what I hoped into regret
And as I look into your eyes
One of love and one despise
Unstick the pages in my heart
Time to make a brand new start
This is so much more emotional now that he's gone :lol
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Oh well. Deal with it.

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Re: Short Poems

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Ironic, eh?
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Re: except he's alive!

Post by zazthespaz »

haha, the whole, "once the artist dies, their pieces increase in value" thing
anguyen92 wrote:
Oh well. Deal with it.
gbruin wrote:
Go reread what zaz says

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