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Josiah

Let It Go

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A shining door, a broken home
Another reason I'm alone
I take my shit, but I give back
As my scars begin to stack
Open bottles, broken glass
Another night spent on the grass
I searched for miles, but found no home
Sixteen years and still I roam

So I lost all control
I let it go, let it go
Sick of playing this role
I let it go, let it go
Look what you've done to me
I'm dead inside, dead inside
And though once I believed
I let it go

Comforted by your own pride
All that you once were has died
And now a new man takes his place
A tounge of love, a hateful face
A hypocrite, a broken mess
But to me, you're even less

So I lost all control
I let it go, let it go
Sick of playing this role
I let it go, let it go
Look what you've done to me
I'm dead inside, dead inside
And though once I believed
I let it go

And there is nothing left to lose
There is nothing left to say
All the memories fade into grey, today
How did you ever come to be this way?

So I lost all control
I let it go, let it go
Sick of playing this role
I let it go, let it go
Look what you've done to me
I'm dead inside, dead inside
And though once I believed
I let it go, let it go

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zazthespaz
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I can imagine Theory of a Deadman playing this
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zazthespaz
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But for reals, I could hear Alter Bridge doing something with this to a tune a little heavier than DTML. So you're welcome, I imagined this song sounding awesome based on words you wrote!
anguyen92 wrote:
Oh well. Deal with it.
gbruin wrote:
Go reread what zaz says

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Re: Let It Go

Post by Andy92 »

Actually I can imagine a good melody for the chorus in this one. Good job Josie. Would be cool to hear something done with this.
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Post by Josiah »

Thanks guyz. Really appreciate it. I wish I was musically proficent. I can't sing and I can hardly play. So I dunno what I'll do with any of my lyrics hahaha.

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Re: Let It Go

Post by Macca »

WOW JOSIE DID U RIT THISS ITS BRILLYENT
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Post by Josiah »

THNXS MACCA BABY. KNOWN THAT YOU THINK IT'S GID MEANS THE MOST.

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