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Re: Short Poems

Posted: Sat May 04, 2013 3:55 pm
by Finaldecision
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Re: Short Poems

Posted: Sat May 04, 2013 3:57 pm
by Finaldecision
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Re: Short Poems

Posted: Sat May 04, 2013 3:58 pm
by Macca
so many folk in this thread needin their hole

Re: Short Poems

Posted: Sat May 04, 2013 4:00 pm
by Finaldecision
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Re: Short Poems

Posted: Sat May 04, 2013 4:04 pm
by Finaldecision
Macca wrote:so many folk in this thread needin their hole


?? :shrug

I'm sorry for posting so many lyrics/poems whatever. Just wanted to share with you and know what people think about it. I want to use them with my band but the other guys aren't that familiar with English. And I'm sure my English isn't perfect either.

I'm glad about every kind of helpful reviews.

The last one deals with some faith issues and probably some of you can't relate to it. Obviously, the first one is about life lessons and dealing with the past.

Re: Short Poems

Posted: Sat May 04, 2013 4:16 pm
by Macca
I'm only winding you up. It was more a shot at Josiah and zaz.

Re: Short Poems

Posted: Sat May 04, 2013 7:26 pm
by AllC392Was
I fill the wind in your hair
I get that funny feeling in thy underwear

sorry bout that...

Re: #harshtruths

Posted: Sun May 05, 2013 9:42 pm
by zazthespaz
Macca wrote:I'm only winding you up. It was more a shot at Josiah and zaz.

Macca's hole gets blown up every Friday, deflated Sunday, and was found in a garbage can behind a 24 hour convenience store.

Re: Short Poems

Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 2:20 am
by Macca
Makes no sense.

Re: Short Poems

Posted: Tue Nov 26, 2013 4:16 am
by GazEd
Lemme post a couple of short texts I wrote for my last band.

The earth's awake forever vainly waiting
For hugs of darness and the silence mean
The sunset burns, the sky's anticipating
The night that falls and brings enchanted dreams

And all who live lead lives gone wrong
They look and search for never-ending peace
As if an angel, singing lonely, silent song
With wings widespread and when he's down on knees

Re: Short Poems

Posted: Tue Nov 26, 2013 6:43 am
by Decay
That was good, GazEd

Re: Short Poems

Posted: Fri Dec 13, 2013 9:06 pm
by Tom
I feel you in the wind
you guide* me constantly
i never knew what it was to be alone no
because you were always there for me
you were always waiting
but now i come home and its not the same, no
smiling down on me, i close my eyes to see
and i know
you're a part of me
and it's your song
that sets me free, i sing it while
i feel i can't hold on
i sing tonight
cus it comforts me

Re: Short Poems

Posted: Sat Dec 14, 2013 6:23 pm
by The Doctor
Rerum Finis

Dont see death at cost of life
An all but end this shallow knife
To firmly grasp the world you hold
Is to protect what fools as gold
Look ahead, yet not to dark
Lest you overlook the spark
And when time comes to take away
Be sure you've left enough to stay

Re: BOOM ALL IMPROV-ED IN FIVE MINUTES

Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2014 1:54 am
by zazthespaz
The Runner

One day I was running and decided not to stop
Until my legs gave and my body did drop.
The feeling reviving and the view divine
Until I realized I was just wasting time.
I was running to nowhere and getting there slow
Away from my problems yet letting them grow.
I stopped in my place and looked back from where I came,
Turned around and then started running to a new day.

Re: Short Poems

Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2014 1:58 am
by Andy92
Clap.
Clap.
Clap.
Clap Clap.
Clap Clap Clap.
Clap Clap Clap Clap.
Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap.

Re: Some plagiarism may have been involved.

Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2014 2:07 am
by zazthespaz
Sob Me a Lake

Shut off the bulbs just shut your eyes and let me know what you see
I'll wager it will not have a Diety damned thing related to me
This is most of what I've got
And I'll be darned to remain adjacent to you.
So go on and sob me a lake
Don't speak words that will be fake
You know you would
You usually shall.

Re: Short Poems

Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2014 5:26 am
by Lotha
"I'll wager it will not have a diety damned thing related to me" :lol

Post your poems from the mafia thread!

Re: More entertaining at least.

Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2014 6:21 am
by Timotheus
These are actually better than the original ones from Josiah..

Re: Not above creating a second randomness thread again

Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2014 12:01 pm
by zazthespaz
Lotha wrote:"I'll wager it will not have a diety damned thing related to me" :lol

Post your poems from the mafia thread!

Nah. Those are works of art that need to be kept in their location for the full contextual feel.

But if it gets real close to me reaching 10,000 posts on the 1,000th page of the randomness thread, I might have to do that. :Lol

Re: 9,000 *kazoo*

Posted: Wed Mar 19, 2014 4:52 pm
by Andy92
I would like to use my 9000th post to write a short poem. The title of the poem is highlighted below.

Summer

There once was a girl named Summer,
Her truck, it roared like a Hummer.
She came to DQ,
There was a party! *kazoo*
When she left it was totally bummer.

:mope