ORIGINAL SONG: Mannaforra - Ever Remain

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Crumbso
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ORIGINAL SONG: Mannaforra - Ever Remain

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Hey all. Another release by my band Mannaforra. We're gearing up to release our first album so any feedback - good, bad or ugly - would be really appreciated. What do you like, what do you hate, and what would you change if you could?



LYRICS
You took and sold a pack of lies.
Guess what's in store.
Never know if it's your time
or it's mine. Just give me more.

Heed this warning!
Your day is dawning, yeah.

Warning sign....

Fight to remain.
Gone insane.
As we ride out to the morning light,
the fight inside this day
is to ever remain.

You throw a look
over your shoulder evermore.
You feel them coming
so you're heading for the door.

Yeah, you keep on running
'till the day you run no more.

Running by....

Fight to remain.
Gone insane.
As we ride out to the morning light,
the fight inside this day
is to ever remain.

Fight to remain.
Gone insane.
As we ride out to the morning light,
the fight inside this day
is to ever remain.
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