Blues based rock song by my band! Opinions are appreciated!!

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CodyLikesDT
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Blues based rock song by my band! Opinions are appreciated!!

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This is a song called "You And I" that I wrote for my side band (my main band is a progressive metal band). It's not really to be taken super seriously or anything, I just started this band for fun. But I would still like your honest opinions. Please give feedback! Be honest, but try not to be too harsh. hahaha.

https://soundcloud.com/beargryllsflip/you-and-i


Lyrics:
Now who's the queen that's behind the machine?
She's kinda clean if you know what I mean
Now that's a smile I haven't seen for a while
I would have smiled back, but it's just not my style

You and I are the same my dear,
You and I are the same
We both have the same things to fear
No, it's not a game

You think my heart is just yours to steal
But I know your game babe, so let's get real
I've heard that line a million times
I know it well because it used to be mine

You and I are the same my dear,
You and I are the same
We both have the same things to fear
No, it's not a game
You and I are to blame my dear,
You and I are to blame
The both of us brought our demons here,
It'll never be the same...

You and I are the same my dear,
You and I are to blame
We both have the same things to fear,
It'll never be the same
RIP Edward Bozoian, my best friend. 1989 - 2009
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Listen to my band's concept album: https://bloodhoundbandcamp.bandcamp.com
Listen to my solo concept album: https://thecircleofwonders.bandcamp.com

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Re: Blues based rock song by my band! Opinions are appreciat

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I like the general overall feel of the song, lyrical context I don't feel so much but music and vocal style I like a lot! Good job.

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Re: Blues based rock song by my band! Opinions are appreciat

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Yeah, I put this band together just for fun, so I didn't spend really any time on the lyrics. I'm using all my good lyrics for my main band. Thanks for the kind words pal!
RIP Edward Bozoian, my best friend. 1989 - 2009
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Listen to my band's concept album: https://bloodhoundbandcamp.bandcamp.com
Listen to my solo concept album: https://thecircleofwonders.bandcamp.com

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